Just remember to breath

Oh boy, I've really done it this time. For practice, I decided to post a pitch to Deb Werksman's pitch fest thinking no way in heck was I going to get the formula to attract the editor's attention. I've tried this pitch bit a few times with epic failure, but it seems I might have gotten something right this time. She asked for the full! Eep!

I know I shouldn't let this request cool for too long, but I really want to comb through some pages and make sure I've hit all the elements this time. After my light bulb moment a few days ago, I'm unsure I didn't totally foul up this piece. At a whopping 9 times longer than that short that tripped me up, there's more room for mistakes.

To do:

1. Send Doubt on vacation. Yes, the little hag's still on my back.
2. Get over this cold. For crying out loud, it's been a week! Go away.
3. Read, edit, read, edit, read...you get the picture.
4. Oh yea, eat, sleep, brush teeth, and all the rest of those little things.

~Hetal